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Sunday, 31 May 2015
Jacek's Fantasy Counterpart
This is from the sequel to my magical fantasy novel THE CATASTROPHE OF THE EMERALD QUEEN. Entitled THE SUNDER OF THE OCTAGON, it contains a character based on Polish KMG instructor Jacek Walczak.
The character is called Alaskadie, a badass of the first order. In this scene he is threatened by a gang of thieves in a tavern.
Enjoy.
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The character is called Alaskadie, a badass of the first order. In this scene he is threatened by a gang of thieves in a tavern.
Enjoy.
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The room was dark and smoky. Very few
people were there and the aura of the place was one of sleepiness and age. Snoring
with his head on the table was Old Ben, drunk as usual after his lunch time
session. At another table sat two men playing a dice game. Their faces were old
and leathery, lacking expression. Occasionally they took swigs from the large
metal tankards by their right hands.
There was little
sound in the room and the figure in the far corner liked it that way. Peace and
quiet. The chance to drink in solitude and reflect on the world. His blue eyes
saw the room in clarity, his mind wandering to memories of his past. His
training, his life, his childhood. Forever waiting for a signal he knew would
never come. Not in his lifetime, or five generations before him. He knew that
his life would be constant anticipation of a call to duty that wouldn’t come.
Alaskadie was
very, very bored.
He glanced to the
bar. The barman was looking at him quizzically. At the crystal gaze from the
blue eyes the barman’s face momentarily flickered with fear and he looked away.
The barman
Steren, had never seen the man before. A well built fellow of well over 6 feet.
His hair was cut to the scalp. He wore a loose shirt, the buttons open to the
navel due to the heat in the room. He could tell the man could handle himself.
He considered himself able to judge people within seconds and his brief
conversation with the stranger had made the hairs on his neck prickle. Muscles
rippled in his arms as he walked, his shoulders broad and all he’d asked for
was a bottle and to be left alone to enjoy it. Quiet yet there was something
frightening about the man.
Oh well, he
thought. At least the stranger meant no harm. Steren turned back to the bottles
behind him and reached for one to brush off the dust. There was a loud crash
and the door the tavern burst open.
“Hey, heeyyyy.
Back in town again. The boys are here!”
Steren winced and
composed himself before turning round. The Aaron brothers. They’d been gone for
weeks and he hoped they’d decided never to come back.
He smiled as he
turned round. “Morning lads, what can I get you? On the house of course.”
Unik Aaron was
facing him. His two brothers either side and four of their friends behind. Unik
was a scrawny man of about five and a half feet. His hair was shoulder length
and lank, the stubble on his face partially hiding the pock marks and
blemishes. Half his left ear was gone, the result of a fight he’d had several
years ago. He grimaced at Steren and tutted loudly. “Now now, let’s not
forget who you’re talking to fat man”, he chided as if talking to a child.
His brothers simply glared at Sengen but the other four tittered loudly. “Of
course the drinks are on the house. You don’t expect us to PAY do you?”
Steren swallowed
hard, trying to control his shaking. “No offence meant boys, take a seat.
I’ll bring a few bottles right over.”
Unik moved
forward slowly, his brothers flanking him. He lunged and grabbed Steren by the
lapels of his shirt, pulling him halfway over the bar. He whispered slowly, “You
call me sir you fat idiot. You understand that?!!”
Steren was
terrified but he nodded slowly then added, “Yes sir”. The Aaron brothers
had clearly had a bad time, whatever they’d been doing while they were away. He
glanced at Malik and Doren, the two younger brothers. They were taller than
Unik, their wide brimmed hats battered by wind and rain. Their long leather
coats faded. All were armed with swords and Steren prayed to his personal gods
that they would simply get drunk and then leave.
Unik smirked and
let him go. He turned to where the two men were playing dice. They were looking
at him with wide eyed fear in silence. Unik smiled amiably and said, “You
two chaps won’t mind buying us a drink will you? And that table is mine I think
you’ll find.”
The four other
mean surrounded them, hands resting on the hilts of their swords. The menace
was palpable but no one spoke. Slowly the two men took leather purses from
their belts and placed them on the table with a loud jingle. Unik chuckled and
the two men stood up and moved to the door, the wall of men parting to let them
out.
“Splendid,” Unik said
grinning. Some of his teeth were missing and his smile was far from pleasant to
see.
“What about him?” one of his men
said, pointing to where Old Ben still sat snoring, head on the table.
Unik chuckled. “Old
Ben’s a good lad. Just leave him. He was a friend of my father’s.”
They pulled
chairs up to the table and Steren arrived with two large bottles of rum.
“That the best
you can do old man?” Unik snapped angrily.
“No, no. Not at
all,” Steren said quickly. Just getting you some more.”
“Good man,” Unik replied,
not looking at him. He pulled the cork with his teeth from a bottle and took a
big swig. Steren returned with two more bottles and put them on the table, then
returning with a tray of small glasses.
“Well lads” Unik said
looking round the dimly lit room, “Never thought I’d see this place again.
Good to be back don’t you think?”
The others
sniggered and one poured rum into the glasses and they raised them in a toast.
“To taking
whatever you want!” Unik said, glancing at Steren who looked away.
The others
shouted back, “WHATEVER WE WANT!” and swiftly downed the drinks.
Unik looked
around the room, his eyes finally fully adjusting to the gloom. He saw the
stranger in the corner. His brow creased. The man was simply staring at them,
one hand holding a glass. As he looked at the stranger the other man made no
attempt to look away or acknowledge him. Unik’s anger riled and he said loudly,
“Well, well boys. Looks like we’ve got a new friend in our tavern. Why don’t we
say hello.” He stood up ,his chair scraping back as he got to his feet.
He sauntered over
to where the stranger sat. The man simply stared at him levelly as he
approached. His brothers flanking him and the others one step behind.
“It’s polite to
introduce yourself when your betters enter a room,” Unik said grinning.
The stranger
simply looked at him, then the others, then slowly raised his glass to his lips
and took a drink.
“Cat got your
tongue?” Unik asked. His brothers smiled and the others giggled again. “I
must say you’re a quiet one. Still I’ll forgive your lack of manners if you buy
us all a drink. Can’t say fairer than that can I?”
The man’s
expression didn’t change. He slowly finished his drink, put his glass on the
table and then wiped his mouth with the back of his hand. He looked past Unik
to the bar, his expression one of complete disinterest. He took the bottle and
filled his glass again, ignoring all of them.
Unik found his
temper fraying. He got respect wherever he went and this man wasn’t even
acknowledging him. His cheerful façade slipped. Through gritted teeth he
hissed, “I’m talking to you. Now you put down that glass and pay attention
to me.” He looked at the stranger’s wrist and saw the bracelet, a many
sided, multi coloured jewel encased in strands of silver over a chunky leather
strap. “I think we can start by you handing over that bracelet if you want
us to forgive your rudeness.” One of his brothers laughed loudly.
Finally the
stranger spoke. His tone was weary and cracked, as if he didn't speak very
often and his voice was rarely used.
“Everywhere I go,
I meet people like you,” he said, staring at Unik again.
Unik felt his
anger overflow. This man wasn't even afraid of him.
“Well, maybe you
won’t go anywhere else my friend.”
Alaskadie eyes
were impossible to read and a look of utter fury began to form, like black
storm clouds on the horizon. He slowly took his hand from the table and a
short, wicked looking blade was revealed that his palm had been covering.
He glared at Unik
and said slowly. “If you can take this knife from the table, then you may
take my bracelet.”
Unik grinned once
more. “Oh, you want to play silly games do you?” He snarled and lunged
for the dagger with one hand while his other lunged for his sword. At this
range he could take the stranger’s head from his shoulders in one swipe. He
grasped the hilt and began drawing the blade, felt it slide from the scabbard,
halfway out, more.
Then…suddenly the
stranger vanished.
Alaskadie appeared in the room. The room
that had been used by his predecessors. The secret room, hidden deep below the
palace and known only to a handful of people, the room where the protectors of
a multitude of worlds could be called. For over a hundred years no Octagon
sentinel had been summoned. Four priests of the Guardianship stood in a semi
circle around the dish in the middle of the room. Their white robes were
dazzling and perfect. Six guards stood in shining armour, hand picked for this
honour that would doubtless not happen again in their lives or the lives of
their children, or their children’s children. Their armour was gleaming as they
stood nervously awaiting the arrival of a legend so secret that it was a fairy
tale for generations. A protector of the Octagon.
With this one
secured and the formalities out of the way, the summoning of the remaining
sentinels could take place. The Prime Guardian calmed his nerves and despite
the gravity of their situation, was immeasurably pleased to have the honour of
being present at such a historic event. The three available would assemble here
and be despatched together to return the crystals that Scious had so stupidly
stolen. A simple task, but one that required a very complex set of protocols
and magic to invoke. To see such a secret order of people in one room was
something few men knew could ever happen, let alone dream of seeing.
As Alaskadie
fully materialised Jakoban began to recite the lines, last spoken generations
ago, to formally welcome the most exalted guest. “It is an honour to be
present at your most…” his voice faltered as he realised something was
terribly wrong.
Instead of a man
materialising before him Jakoban could only see a chaotic weaving of clothing
and flesh. It was as if someone was shaking the man inside the Shimmer dish
like a dog with a rat. With a final flash of bright light the sentinel fully
appeared.
The figure before
them wasn’t a man but a pure blur of motion, impossible to focus upon. Before
anyone could speak the blur moved incredibly fast from the stone dish and the
nearest guard went flying into the wall, armour crashing loudly. The others
didn’t have time to react before the blur moved to them. In the space of a few
seconds all five were thrown like rag dolls into the walls of the room. Jakoban
made to move away but the blur turned towards him and through a scattered staccato
of speech, the terrifying vision swarmed on him, high shouts and yells
emanating from the spinning smear of violence. Jakoban felt himself lifted and
hurled backwards, landing heavily into the crystals set out so lovingly for the
summoning of the sentinel’s fellow kind. The precious glass smashed as it
collided with the wall and floor. The other priests scattered to the far end of
the long room. The haze snarled in anger and made towards them but suddenly
purple light erupted from the doorway and cocooned the hazy form. It continued
to thrash violently but the cocoon morphed until it held the man in an oval
prison. Alaskadie howled in frustration and the priests turned to stare in
fright at the doorway. Jakoban raised his head and stared in frightened awe at
the spectacle.
Sophie stood
there, Mordalayn beside her. Her hand was raised, the purple light emanating
from her outstretched fingertips. Alaskadie continued to thrash and blur inside
his tiny cell, screaming with rage. Mordalayn stared at the spectacle, his brow
furrowing in concern, for the first time in a long time, not knowing what to
do.
Sophie spoke, her
voice quiet but carrying in the narrow room. “Octagon sentinel, we are not
your enemies. We summoned you because we need you. Please trust us.”
Alaskadie beat
against the walls of light holding him. The oval cocoon stuttered and Sophie
muttered some words and the spell was reinforced, pinning the furious,
screeching man once more.
“Please,
Alaskadie. We need you, we are not your enemies, please trust us.”
The blur began to
slow and Alaskadie became visible to the entranced audience. As the blurring
slowed more they could see the sweat lining every visible piece of skin on his
body and soaking his clothes, his shirt stuck to his muscled chest and heavy
arms. As his body stopped hazing he staggered and fell to his knees with a
thud, breathing heavily, palms open to support him as he panted and gasped.
“I will release
the holding spell now, we are not your enemies,” Sophie said once
more.
Mordalayn’s sword
was instantly in his hand. “My Lady!” he growled, moving to stand in
front of her.
She turned to
stare up at her bodyguard. “Takoba, he is not a threat. Look.” With that
she lowered her hand and the purple light vanished. Alaskadie remained on his
knees, his breath coming in ragged gasps. Slowly he raised his head and looked
at them both, saying nothing.
“What, what is
he?”
Mordalayn asked in bewilderment, staring at the man.
“He is a rage
dancer, he can harness the power of warping . A power known only to few and
used very rarely. He is now exhausted beyond endurance. The guards are lucky
they did not draw their swords. If they had he would have killed them.” She turned to
Alaskadie. “You are my guest here but we have need of you Chosen One.”
Slowly Alaskadie
stood up, almost falling as he staggered upright.
“Are you calm
now?” Sophie asked gently, her face full of concern
After a long
pause Alaskadie took a deep breath. “You are the Emerald ruler?” he
asked still panting, his breath slowly returning to normal.
Sophie looked at
the man then replied. “I am. Why were you warping when we summoned you?”
she asked looking puzzled.
Alaskadie smiled.
“In over 100 years, no sentinel has ever been named for summoning. The fates decreed that you
called me to you just as I was about to teach some cut throats a lesson.”
Sophie smiled too
and Mordalayn resheathed his sword and stood back. The priests moved hesitantly
forward and the guards sat up groaning and painfully stood. Alaskadie turned to
Jakoban and winced when he saw the devastation he had wrought upon the
crystals. The only way of summoning the most elite of warriors. “My
apologies. My actions were not malicious. Can you still summon my brother and
sister kind?”
Jakoban shook his
head and with a wheeze, the bearded man replied. “The crystals were
priceless. They can be replaced but not in time. I am afraid that you now are
our only hope.”
Alaskadie shook
his head sadly and reached down to help Jakoban up. His hands were soaking with
sweat. Once the priest was on his feet Alaskadie turned to Sophie. “Emerald
queen. Please tell me what you require of me. I, Alaskadie, guardian of the
Octagon , am yours to command.”
“Come” she said and they
left the room.
Saturday, 23 May 2015
Mordalayn and the Bully
This is from my novel THE CATASTROPHE OF THE EMERALD QUEEN. Aimed at readers aged 10+ it's a magical fantasy set in another world. While not specifically Kravvy, this chapter has anti-bullying themes and shows that sometimes the only thing that can stop a bully is an even bigger bully.
Recently I've wondered if the outcome would have been different if Maria had done Junior Krav. But then I'd have had to find another way to show just HOW much Mordalayn hates bullies.
Artwork by Paul Rose.
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As
they began to bed down for the night Stone spied that Blautin hadn’t put his
flute in his backpack. He made a snatch for it and Blautin span round.
“Give it back,” the younger boy snapped angrily as
the older child grinned and held on to the flute, dangling it out of reach of
the frantic swipes of its owner.
“Come and get it,” Stone said, jumping up and
dancing around. The others barely took notice but then Blautin stood still and
started to cry.
Stone didn’t stop and instead started to laugh.
“Hey, what are you? A little…”
“ENOUGH!”
Everyone jumped and looked at Mordalayn who was
sitting opposite the two boys across the fire. There was a horrible silence and
Stone stared at the warrior, embarrassed and scared. Blautin stopped crying and
wiped his wet cheeks with the back of his sleeve.
“Give it to him,” Mordalayn growled.
“I was just messing…” Stone began but was
interrupted.
“You are a bully and bullies are despicable,”
Mordalayn said with limitless menace. Everyone was looking at him. Challandra
was scared, knowing the Caracalic’s reputation. Leppard glanced from Mordalayn
to the boys and then back. Stone handed the flute back to Blautin and then sat
down, his cheeks burning with shame. He hugged his knees and looked away.
After a long pause Mordalayn spoke again. This time
more softly.
“Bullying is vile. Would you have liked it if
he’d taken something you loved?”
Stone shook his head mutely. Blautin sat down,
putting his prized flute in its silk cloth and wrapping it carefully before
putting it in his pack. He sniffed the last of his tears away and looked at
Mordalayn, at the same time frightened and reassured.
The Caracalic had everyone’s attention and he spoke
calmly and quietly, the only other sound in the forest the crackling of the
fire.
“To make someone weaker than you a victim
only for your own pleasure is beyond vileness.” He glanced around slowly at
everyone as he said this. No one could meet his eyes, even Bue and Leppard
lowered their gazes.
“Recently I saw this.”
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Mordalayn had been shadowing Jared for four days in
Warwick . The spell he’d placed on Queen Sophie would
prevent their enemies from finding her now. However, she was still vulnerable
and as long as Jared was trackable they could, if they could get to him before
she came out of her death sleep, use him to find her.
Mordalayn had followed him and his parents this night to a house where a woman
holding a baby had answered the door. The house was in an area that Mordalayn
had not explored before. He looked around. The sun was going down and he
glanced at his wrist band. The crystal was still a murky shade of green. He
needed to eat. He’d smelled food about quarter of a mile east from here and
decided to break off to find rations. Drawing his hood over his face and
pulling his robes tight around him, he leapt from the roof he was on to the
adjoining one and then shimmied down the drain pipe to a path between two
houses. Behind them was some coarse ground and he vaulted the fence and ran
along the edge of the copse of trees, keeping to the shadows. Shortly he came
to a junction and turned right keeping his back to the walls. Leaping up again
he climbed silently and fluidly to the roof of a detached house and ran
soundlessly across the tiles to the peak. He knew the stores here would
certainly have bins out the back for disposing of unwanted food that he could
forage for. He was about to move along the roof when he looked down and
something caught his eye.
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“Oooh sissy dolly,” Aiden snapped at Maria nastily.
Maria was scared. She’d gone to the shops to
buy some milk for her mother and Aiden was there. She didn’t like Aiden. He was
older, bigger and bullied her and the other small kids at every chance he got.
The shops were only round the corner, she could see the front garden of her
house from here. She hoped someone would help her but there was no one around.
Aiden grinned at her, his smile not even
remotely reassuring and held out his hand.
“Give it to me and let me look at it.”
Maria gripped the doll even tighter and shook
her head. She knew that if she gave it to him, even for a second, she’d never
see it again or he’d break it.
Aiden moved forward, backing her up against the
wall and looked both ways in case any adults were around or that nosey
Community Support Officer who occasionally wandered round the estate.
“Let me hold it for a second and I’ll let you
have it back,” he said.
Maria was on the verge of tears and didn’t want
Aiden to see her crying. “Let me go Aiden,” she pleaded. “My mummy will be
wondering where I am.”
“Best give me the doll then you stupid cow,”
he said trying to snatch it from her.
Maria bolted and ran and Aiden followed her laughing.
“Go on run little cow!” he whooped, easily catching her up in about three
steps.
Maria screeched as Aiden tripped her up, pushing
her down on the paved slabs outside the shops. She skidded and fell, the milk
carton going flying and bursting open.
Aiden reached down and grabbed her doll in
his grubby hands. She screamed as he tore it free from her grip and shook it in
front of her triumphantly.
“See what happens when you don’t do what you’re
told?!!” he shouted at her.
Maria had skimmed her knees as she fell and
she started to cry. Aiden grinned and grabbed the head of her doll and pulled
hard.
“No!” Maria screamed at him as the head came
free with a pop. Aiden laughed and dropped it on the floor and put his filthy
trainer on it, stamping up and down on the plastic body and twisting his
foot.
Maria bawled loudly, looking on helplessly as Aiden
ruined her toy. The doll was a present from her nana, who had died last year,
and it was her favourite. Giving the doll one last twist with his foot Aiden turned
around and walked off laughing.
Staggering to her feet Maria looked around
and ran wailing into her home, shouting for her mother.
Aiden walked down the alley between Maria’s
house and the precinct of shops. Whistling a happy tune with his hands in his
tracksuit bottoms he failed to notice the cold, furious eyes that watched him
silently from a rooftop across the square.
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When Aiden got home his mother was in front of the
huge plasma screen TV in their lounge. She turned as he came in, her half smoked
cigarette clutched in her fingers. “Get yourself some dinner, there’s microwave
corned beef hash in the freezer.”
“Whatever!” Aiden said disinterestedly and
slunk off upstairs, leaving his mother in a cloud of smoke watching television.
He went up to his room and opened the door
with the sign, “Aiden’s Den. Keep Out or be Dead,” on it with a black skull and
crossbones.
He switched on the TV in his room and turned on his
games console. He fell back onto his bed and picked up the control pad while a
war game started to load. As the game began he became engrossed in the action,
not noticing the squeak on the stairs that meant someone was coming up.
As his door opened he hit “pause” on the pad and
cursed loudly. “Mum! I told you to knock when you….” then looked up and his
voice trailed off abruptly.
Mordalayn stood glaring at him in the doorway. His
rage at what he’d seen the boy do to the little girl was barely controlled as
he silently closed the door.
Aiden stammered. “What, wh..who are YOU?”
Mordalayn moved forward and stood towering over him
silent and terrifying, his hood thrown back to reveal his face. Aiden gulped,
the game controller forgotten in his hands, his eyes flicking over the huge
sword on the stranger’s back and the figure’s cat face, whiskers bristling
angrily. Glancing around the room Mordalayn saw the chaos of a young boy’s
bedroom with old sweet wrappers and magazines on the floor amongst old clothes.
He looked around slowly and his eyes finally rested on Aiden.
“The necklace you’re wearing. Give it to me,”
he said flatly.
Aiden’s hand went up to the chunky, gold
necklace he wore. It was a present from his father for his tenth birthday.
“What? No way. Get lost!”
He scrambled to his feet and made for the door but
Mordalayn grabbed him by the collar and hauled him back, clamping his gloved
hand over Aiden’s mouth to stifle the boy’s yell of fear. He tugged hard at the
necklace which snapped free with a jerk, two of the links clattering to the
floor and Aiden yelped.
Casually placing the chain into a pocket of his
robe Mordalayn tossed Aiden back against a pile of dirty clothes in the corner
of the room. As he reached for the door handle Aiden found his voice.
“Don’t take that. Please! My dad gave me that.”
He started to cry.
Mordalayn paused for a second then turned. He
glared at Aiden and his green eyes narrowed. “You laughed at that little girl’s
tears today,” he said slowly. “Remember how this feels.” Then he opened the
door and closed it behind him. He lithely crept down the stairs and walked past
the lounge doorway, Aiden’s mother was still engrossed in her TV show and never
noticed as Mordalayn made for the open kitchen door and vanished into the back
garden.
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Maria’s mother Sylvia kissed her forehead as she
slept, heartbroken about what had happened. She’d disinfected Maria’s grazed
knees and cuddled her while she cried herself to sleep. “That boy Aiden is utterly vile” she thought, but the police either
couldn’t or wouldn’t do anything about his behaviour. Each time they either
failed to return her calls or simply sent that useless community support
officer round to deal with it. The officer had tried to visit Aiden’s home to
discuss the matter with his mother but she had simply screamed at her to go
away. The only advice the police were willing to give now was “tell Maria to
keep away from him.”
She stroked Maria’s hair and pulled a stray lock
away from her face, tucking it behind her ear. Sighing, she stood and pulled
the door half closed, the landing light casting a subdued beam into the room. Taking
one last look at her sleeping daughter she went downstairs into the
kitchen.
Making for the rubbish bin Sylvia pulled the white
bin liner free and checking there were no holes in the bag she tied the yellow
string tightly at the top and opened the kitchen door. She walked the ten or so
yards to the large wheelie bins on her driveway and opening the nearest one she
tossed the bag inside. Before she could close it a thick voice spoke quietly.
“Don’t be frightened but please don’t turn around.”
Sylvia jumped with fear. “What do you want?”
she stammered. “I haven’t got any money on me.”
“I’m not here to hurt you,” the voice replied. “I
just want to give you something.” Sylvia twitched her head but there was only a
shadow behind her, the low light on the driveway was not enough to see by. She
closed the dustbin lid and rested her hands on it. After a pause the voice
continued.
“The boy who hurt your daughter today will never do
that again. He is sorry and he wants you to have this to make up for his
actions.”
Sylvia glanced to her right as a paper bag was
placed on the lid of the wheelie bin next to her. The gloved hand withdrew and
after a long silence she slowly turned round. The driveway was empty. Breathing
out heavily she placed one hand on the wall to steady herself. Then she delicately
picked up the bag and walked into the kitchen to see what was inside.
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Next morning Maria came downstairs for breakfast
bleary eyed and grumpy. She was still upset and was surprised to see her mother
making pancakes at the cooker, singing softly to herself. As Maria came in she
smiled broadly.
“Hello my little angel” Sylvia said, wiping her
hands on a tea towel, hugging Maria then kissing her cheek.
“What’s the special occasion mummy?” Maria asked,
looking confused and taking her seat at the breakfast table. They only usually
had pancakes on special days like Shrove Tuesday or sometimes on a Sunday.
“Well my sweet, today is a special day because your
grandmother has bought you a new doll.”
Maria thought about this and even though she was
only 7 she wasn’t stupid. “Mummy, how can nana buy me a doll?”
Sylvia smiled again, barely able to contain
herself. “Look in the bag darling,” she said, nodding to the white paper packet
on the table.
Creasing her face in confusion Maria leaned over
the table and took hold of the packet. She placed it in her lap and opened it.
Reaching inside she pulled out the contents and gasped.
Inside was her doll, but different. It had
golden, curly hair down to its waist. which shone in the morning light from the
window.
“Oh mummy, it’s beautiful,” she exclaimed,
holding it up and smiling. Sylvia put her arms around Maria and laughed. “Yes
my dear, it’s lovely,” She saw her daughter’s face light up with joy and
wondered who had been the one who’d put things right.
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“So, remember when you tease or bully someone else
you cause them pain that can usually not be taken back.”
Stone, who’d taken the flute, bowed his head in
shame and after another long silence Leppard said, “I think we all need to try
and get some sleep now. We have an early start in the morning.”
The boys began silently arranging their packs as
pillows. No one spoke and no one would look directly at Mordalayn in case they
met his steel gaze.
Saturday, 27 September 2014
Multiple Attackers in a Magical Fantasy Novel
This is a scene from my latest book THE SUNDER OF THE OCTAGON, a magical fantasy adventure aimed at older children.
This scene was inspired by the idea of "What would happen if a guy who was trained to fight in a very Kravvy way was magically turned into a geriatric...BUT then magically regained his youth and turned on his multiple attackers."
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An hour later Jeroth sat in the
chair in his small room while Calson sat on the floor, cross legged,
happily brushing away at the left boot. Jeroth looked down at his
gnarled, calloused feet and winced. Glancing across at the boy he
snapped, “No, no. Brush in one direction only, towards the toes.
You got it now?”
Calson squinted at the boot and
held it up then smiled. “Think so…”
“Good, when you’ve done
that there’s…”
Before he could finish there was
a mighty bang and the door crashed open. Three huge men stood in the
doorway. Calson jumped with fear and leapt to his feet. Jeroth stared
at them in disbelief.
“There he is, the little
runt!” one of the men growled. Calson looked terrified.
“You shouldn’t steal from
your betters boy!” another snarled as they pounded into the
room, their huge feet making the walls shake.
Calson ran behind Jeroth and
gibbered “I didn’t do nothing like. Wasn’t me.”
“Don’t lie you little
wretch!” the second man said. They were all hugely powerful men
and they ignored Jeroth as they advanced on the cowering, frightened
boy.
Jeroth stood, his anger raised
more by them ignoring him than their unwanted presence. “What do
you want?”
The men stopped for a moment,
looked at each other and then laughed.
“Ohh, ho. Silly old fool”
the first man said sneering. “Don’t be a stupid old man, just
get out the way.”
Jeroth stared at them. There was
a time when he could have put all three of these men down in seconds,
in a fair or unfair fight. He felt his anger rise again. Calson stood
behind him, clearly terrified.
“Just go and leave us, you
have no right to be here!” Jeroth shouted, his voice cracking.
He brought his walking stick up and caught the middle man in the
crotch with it. The man yelped and his eyes crossed as he sagged to
his knees.
“Right, that’s it!”
the first man snarled and drew a dagger. Before Jeroth could react
the man plunged it into his chest. He grinned as the blade went
through Jeroth’s jerkin.
“Gave you your chance old
fool!” he hissed. Jeroth glared at him as he started to fall
forwards, his hand fumbling weakly for the handle of the blade.
As the thug went to pull the
knife free Jeroth’s face lit up with a blinding glow, the rays
spreading rapidly down his body.
“Gods Theub, never seen
your blade do THAT before!” the first thug said blinking in
shock. Jeroth collapsed on the floor, his whole body shining brightly
as the men looked down.
“Oh well, stranger
things…and all that” Theub said and turned back to Calson.
“Now look what mischief you’ve caused. You’ll pay dearly for
this!”
The man on his knees struggled
upright, drawing in breath in big gasps. Jeroth’s body continued to
shine. “Weird” the man said shaking his head. “Get the brat
outside.”
Calson squealed as Theub grabbed
him by the ear and pulled him upright. As the man turned to the door
a heavy hand descended on his shoulder. He turned to find a stranger
glaring at him. Bearded, over six feet tall and heavily built.
Theub’s dagger was sticking out from his chest.
The man looked down at the knife
and with his other hand pulled it free. “Tsk, tsk” he said
tossing the blade away. “We won’t be needing that now.”
Before Theub could react the man punched him in the face. He flew
back across the room. Calson stared in confusion at the newcomer.
“Wait outside boy!” he barked. “This is not for your
eyes!”
As Calson shot out the door and
down the steps he heard the man laugh loudly.
“Right! Who wants to go
first?” CRASH!
“No sorry, sorry…it was a
mistake!” SMASH!”
“It's naughty to tell
lies!!” THUD! CRASH!
“PLEASE…we’re sorry!
Aahhh! No, no….!” SMASH!
“Just you two left now,
tell you what I’ll fight with my hands behind my back!” THUD!
CRASH! SPLINTER!
“Ha! Haa! Never said I
wouldn’t use my head and feet though did I?” CRASH!
“Ugh! Stop please, we’re
sorry!”
“Not as much as you’re
going to be!!!” THUD! SPLINTER! CRASH!
Calson stared at the window as
the noise continued. Suddenly the glass shattered and Theub came
hurtling out and landed on his back in the street. He groaned and
moved weakly, cuts and bruises on his face.
The bearded man came down the
steps, holding his newly polished boots and whistling.
“Ahhh, that feels better!”
he said pulling on his right boot and then kicking the prone figure
as hard as he could. Theub groaned again. “Just what I needed,”
he smiled happily, pulling on his other boot and then turning to
Calson who flinched in fear.
“It’s alright boy, it’s
me” he said. He held out his hands and Calson moved towards
him. Jeroth quickly took him under the armpits, swung him up in the
air laughing before putting him down again.
Calson stammered, “But
what, what happened to you?” he asked, totally confused.
“You appear to be an
‘innocent’ as hard as that is to believe,” Jeroth replied,
winking. He reached down and felt into the groaning man’s pockets,
grunting with satisfaction as he found a thick leather purse. He
opened it and emptied gold coins into his palm. “Time for a
steak, a fine wine and clothes that fit. Maybe even to ride a horse
again.” Calson stared on in amazement.
Jeroth kicked Theub again and
walked off. He turned to Calson. “Well, come on lad, you saved
me. You get to come too!” Calson fell in step behind him.
Jeroth began singing his
favourite song. It was a song about a blackbird and a milkmaid. Life
was good again. Now the Emerald Queen’s spell had been reversed.
Monday, 10 February 2014
Krav Maga in Children's Magical Fantasy Novel
I have written a children's book called The Catastrophe of the Emerald Queen which is magical fantasy for readers aged 10+.
The novel has major anti-bullying themes and I'm currently working on the sequel called The Sunder of the Octagon.
With the permission of Expert 3 Krav Maga Global instructor Jacek Walczak I've based one character's physical appearance on him (simple reason, Jacek looks scary). I did the Bus't Up seminar with Jacek last year.
The guy in the novel is called Alaskadie, an elite warrior of a hidden order called the Octagon Sentinels. In this scene he's being threatened by a baddy while minding his own business in a tavern. Reason he looks bored is he knows that the other man (and the 4 other guys just off page that are with him) are absolutely no threat and he can take them all down without effort.
Once the book is out, Jacek gets a free, signed copy.

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